<div dir="ltr"><div><br class="gmail-Apple-interchange-newline"><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:14px">Part 1 of </span><a href="https://archiveofourown.org/series/4457434" style="color:rgb(17,17,17);text-decoration-line:none;border-width:0px 0px 1px;border-top-style:initial;border-right-style:initial;border-bottom-style:solid;border-left-style:initial;border-color:initial;outline:0px;font-size:14px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:0px;padding:0px">Phantom Sales</a> -- Phantom Sails?<br></div><div><br></div>"

<span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:15.12px">a phantom ship known for being unable to tame" -- unable to be tamed?</span><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:15.12px">"</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">tame the one all sailors appear to" -- "appeared", also maybe "the one ship"?</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">"</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">following strict ass all fucking" -- "as" lol</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">"</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">combining his anger issues, need for thrill" -- his need for a thrill</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">"</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">Were a match made it heaven that meant" -- "</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">Were a match made in heaven, and that meant"</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">"</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">At the time, Phil had found that strange. Had thought that his mother and father never kept secrets from each other. Were a match made it heaven that meant they were truthful towards each other and in love. Never hurt each other and always loved one another." -- I see what you're going for here, but I'd put a pronoun at the beginning of each sentence in that paragraph except the first, personally.</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">"</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px;font-style:oblique">despite the rot of it's would</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px;font-style:oblique"> " --</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"> wood</span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">keep that godsdamned promise of it was the last thing -- if</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">to see Kristin there, waiting for Phil -- waiting for him</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">where his wife was peaking adorably -- peeking</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px">scrunched up in a child, gremlin-like smile -- child-like or childish</span><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(42,42,42);font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";font-size:15.12px"><br></span></div><div><p style="border:0px;outline:0px;font-size:15.12px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:1.286em auto;padding:0px;line-height:1.5;color:rgb(42,42,42)">even more in love with her, if even possible. -- if that was even possible</p><p style="border:0px;outline:0px;font-size:15.12px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:1.286em auto;padding:0px;line-height:1.5;color:rgb(42,42,42)"><span style="font-size:15.12px">need to eat." Kristin said -- need to eat", Kristin said,</span><br></p><p style="border:0px;outline:0px;font-size:15.12px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:1.286em auto;padding:0px;line-height:1.5;color:rgb(42,42,42)"><span style="font-size:15.12px"><br></span></p><p style="border:0px;outline:0px;font-size:15.12px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:1.286em auto;padding:0px;line-height:1.5;color:rgb(42,42,42)"><span style="font-size:15.12px">with a whiny, (and obviously guilty), "nooooo". -- either commas or parens to separate out the second clause, not both</span><span style="font-size:15.12px"><br></span></p><p style="border:0px;outline:0px;font-size:15.12px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:1.286em auto;padding:0px;line-height:1.5;color:rgb(42,42,42)"><span style="font-size:15.12px">his plate back, pating the boy's hair -- patting</span><span style="font-size:15.12px"><br></span></p><p style="border:0px;outline:0px;font-size:15.12px;font-family:"Lucida Grande","Lucida Sans Unicode",Verdana,Helvetica,sans-serif,"GNU Unifont";vertical-align:baseline;list-style:none;margin:1.286em auto;padding:0px;line-height:1.5;color:rgb(42,42,42)"><br></p></div></div>